Hi,

Please look at this tour and maybe say something.

http://www.navigatorvr.home.pl/start.html

Please keep in mind that this is CD presentation, so files isn't  small.

Thanks in advance

Andrew

Hi Andrew,

I just responded to ur first posting of this tour... I must admit that I didn't actually realsie that there was a tour hidden behind the enter button the first time I saw the tour. I like the conceptual layout... however, I do have quite a few pointers that should be considered.

The initial image... ie the intro image/ the money image is very fuzzy and therefore not that appealing. The focus isn't that great. R u useing a one shot lens?? Because of the graininess of the image, the near zoom makes it even more obvious. Also it appears that u're on a hill, as the image has a slant. The map is fairly unsharp... there is no need for that. Especially not if u are aiming for clients like the Meridian. Finally, overexposed shots... sorry, u really need to do something there as it reduces the value of ur work and of the overall effect of the tour. Do multiple shots and get some blending practice.

Sorry if I seem somewhat harsh, but I can see that u know what u want to achieve, and I'd love to see u succeed in producing good quality work. Let us know if we can help. Thanks for sharing... ;-)

Rob

Thanks again Robert, it's really helpfull and I try do something with yours suggestion, it's really very helpfull for me.

Andrew.