Pixel,
I like the layout it is very good and the logo look sweet.
Your wording in the first paragraph is a little over the top with Virtuals and Carolina's.
Yours reads:
Charlotte virtual tours can easily be created by 360 Virtuals. The virtual tour business of 360 Virtuals is located just south of Charlotte, NC. in Fort Mill, SC. Virtually covering the Carolina's, 360 Virtuals offers vt photography and tours from the panoramic views of the blue ridge mountains to the sandy shores of the outer banks.
Maybe it just because I'm not from your parts or the fact I'm Australian but I feel it would better read something like this:
Virtual Tours of Charlotte can easily be created by 360 Virtuals. The photography tour business of 360 Virtuals is located just south of Charlotte, NC. just over the boarder in Fort Mill, SC. Covering the Carolina's, 360 Virtuals offers virtual reality photography tours from the panoramic views of the blue ridge mountains to the sandy shores of the outer banks.
I'm not even sure that's any better after reading it back?
I also have to agree with Vince, there is no need to educate the clients in the "exact" equipment and software. I would simply state that you use a variety of top of the range equipment and software. I do understand from the photography point of view though. Maybe this could be limited to a one page buried deeper sub area for people who wish to dig or be pointed too? More of an about me and what I use page.
Again, I do like the design.
Regards, Smooth
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